
You give a girl a ride
To the right part of town
When you’re in the groove
She expects you’ll know what to do
.
But you just stand and stare
Let’s see you dancing, if you dare
As if, Devil may care
.
The force you make me feel
When we’re standing still
300 miles in a moment
Speeding in perpetual motion
.
But you just stand and stare
Let’s see you dancing, if you dare
As if, Devil may care
.
I want to grab so I can hold on
But you’re too hot it blushes me up
Firewater adds to the problem
Burning at my bosom
.
But you just stand and stare
Let’s see you dancing if you dare
As if, Devil may care
.
There are about 90 lyrics on here since 2 years ago, and about 50 more I’ve written, but nobody is really interested so I haven’t really been trying to write. I get less than 10 views for most posts. There is little motivation to write. I have no bands or artists with which to collaborate.
I hope the world finds truth and stops those killing creativity and making others miserable through bullying or by blocking their life.
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Beautifully expressed Abelia I know you can be a bit dejected when such beautiful works don’t get the appreciation they deserve but there’s always a right time. A few people have been gifted the gift of writing their soul on paper and a Very very few have been gifted to read and connect with these mere words filled with deep emotions and feelings. Keep writing for yourself! You have a gift 🍁
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I tried to comment but the comment isn’t getting posted!
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Beautifully expressed Abelia I know you can be a bit dejected when such beautiful works don’t get the appreciation they deserve but there’s always a right time. A few people have been gifted the gift of writing their soul on paper and a very very few people have been gifted to read and connect with these mere words filled with deep emotions. Keep writing for yourself.you have a gift!🍁
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Thank you. These are the first comments for a couple of years, so it does not surprise me that it was not straight forward sending them. I am not much for internet communication, I am not comfortable with the superficial nature, but having nothing posted at all, and such few views, on over 150 works seems particularly cruel, especially after I had a few comments when I first started posting 3 years ago. Needless to say, this reflects my real world nowadays, though my poems and lyrics are purely fictional and imagined situations.
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My comment is not just a formality, but a pure message that I wanted to deliver it to you! The world out there is selfish, and has time only for their own selfish purposes! But your writings are really beautiful! I must say!!!don’t lose the essence🍁
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